Every PARENT Must WATCH Before Allowing Their DAUGHTERS To Live With UNCLES .
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Every Parent Must Watch Before Allowing Their Daughters to Live with Uncles
Chapter 1: The Goodbye
The morning Ada left home, Lagos was waking slowly. Roosters still called, the sky half blue and half gold. Her mother tied Ada’s hair with a red ribbon and brushed the dust from her sandals. “Be good, Ada,” she whispered. “Listen, study hard, and pray before you sleep.” Ada nodded, clutching the small nylon bag that held her two dresses, a comb, and her exercise books.
She was twelve, thin as a broomstick, but her eyes shone with hope. Her father stood by the doorway, arms crossed, silent—the silence of a man who loves too deeply to speak. They had decided Ada would stay with her mother’s elder sister, Auntie Rose, and her husband, Uncle Ben. They lived in a better part of town, close to a good school. To Ada’s parents, it sounded like a blessing. To Ada, it sounded like the beginning of her dreams.
The road to their house was long and full of noise. Buses honked, traders shouted, gospel music spilled from every shop. Ada pressed her face to the bus window, watching the city fly by. She had never seen buildings so tall or people walking so fast.
When she reached the house, Auntie Rose hugged her warmly. “You’ve grown so much,” she said. Uncle Ben came from the living room, smiling in his neat shirt. “So this is our scholar,” he teased. “Welcome home, Ada.”
For a while, it truly felt like home.
Chapter 2: Settling In
Uncle Ben drove her to school on her first day. He bought her meat pie after classes and told her stories about when he was her age. When Auntie Rose scolded Ada for forgetting to wash her socks, he laughed softly. “Leave her, my dear,” he said. “She’s still settling in. Children forget things.”
Ada liked him. Everyone did. He was calm, soft-spoken, always helping neighbors fix things, always smiling. At night, when the city hummed and generators filled the air with their steady growl, Ada lay in bed dreaming of finishing school, of becoming a nurse, of sending money back home so her mother could rest. She promised herself she would never disappoint them.
One evening after dinner, Auntie Rose asked her to clean the table. Ada dropped a plate by mistake. It shattered. Her aunt jumped, startled. “Ada, how many times?” But Uncle Ben raised a hand. “It’s okay,” he said gently. “It’s just a plate. Don’t frighten the child.” His voice was so kind that even Ada’s tears stopped halfway. Auntie Rose shook her head, muttering, “You’ll spoil her one day, Ben.” He smiled. “Let her be a child.”
That night, Ada wrote in her notebook, “Uncle Ben is the nicest man I’ve ever met.”
Days turned into weeks. Every morning, she heard him whistling as he left for work. Every evening, he brought bread or sweets. When Auntie Rose traveled for a church program, he made sure Ada ate her meals and finished her homework. He was patient, gentle, sometimes too gentle.
Once, when she came home late from school, her aunt shouted, “Do you want me to lose my mind because of you?” Uncle Ben stepped in again. “Rose, she’s a child. Maybe traffic held them up. Don’t scold her so hard.” Ada stared at him, grateful. No one had ever defended her like that before. He smiled and said quietly, “Don’t cry, my girl. You did nothing wrong.”
That night, Ada told herself that maybe he was right. Maybe she really was lucky.
Chapter 3: The Change
Weeks became months. Ada learned the rhythm of the house—Auntie Rose’s loud morning prayers, Uncle Ben’s steady footsteps, the smell of fried eggs and plantain every Sunday. She loved her school. Her teachers said she was sharp, polite, always ready to help. At night, she did homework at the dining table while Uncle Ben read his newspaper nearby. Sometimes he would look up and ask, “How’s my scholar doing?” Ada would smile shyly. “Fine, sir.” “Sir?” he laughed. “Call me uncle, my girl.”
He always spoke kindly. When she forgot to sweep or spilled water, he never shouted. “Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. That’s how you learn.” Auntie Rose, however, had little patience. She scolded Ada often for leaving lights on, walking too slowly, daydreaming during chores. “Rose,” Uncle Ben would say, “you’ll scare the poor child. Let her breathe.” Then he would wink at Ada when his wife wasn’t looking. It felt like a secret friendship, something soft and safe in a house that sometimes felt heavy.
At school, her friends teased her. “Your uncle sounds like a saint. Mine won’t even help with school fees.” Ada laughed. “He’s just kind.” “Kind uncles don’t exist in Lagos,” another joked. Ada smiled but didn’t reply. She believed she’d found something rare—real goodness.
Sometimes on weekends, Uncle Ben dropped her at the library before heading out. He’d hand her a few naira for snacks. “Books are better friends than most people,” he’d say. Ada liked that sentence so much she wrote it at the back of her notebook.
But little things started to change. He began to notice more—her handwriting, her smile, how she plaited her hair. “You’re growing fast,” he’d say softly. “You’ll soon be taller than your aunt.” Ada would laugh awkwardly. “No, uncle.” He’d chuckle. “Ah, it’s true. You’re becoming a fine young lady.” His tone was light, but something about it made her heartbeat faster. Still, he was kind, so she brushed it off.
Chapter 4: The Silence
Another time she dropped a bowl in the kitchen. Her aunt shouted, “Ada, what’s wrong with you? You want to destroy everything in this house?” Ada froze, holding the broken pieces. Uncle Ben stepped in from the sitting room. “Rose, enough. It’s just a bowl.” “Ben, you always defend her.” “And why not?” he said, voice firm. “You were her age once.” Auntie Rose sighed loudly and walked away. Ada stood there trembling, eyes full of tears. He took the bowl from her gently. “Don’t cry. I’ll buy another one tomorrow.” Again, Ada whispered, “Thank you, Uncle.”
That night, she prayed longer than usual. She thanked God for putting such a good man in her life, but something in her chest felt strange. A small, quiet fear she couldn’t name.
As the days went by, the house grew quieter. Auntie Rose traveled more often for church programs. When she was gone, the house felt too big. Only Ada and Uncle Ben’s footsteps echoed through the hall. He would still buy her bread and fruits, still tell her stories. But sometimes his eyes stayed on her a second too long. Ada didn’t understand what that meant.
One evening, while clearing the table, she asked shyly, “Uncle, why do you always defend me even when I’m wrong?” He smiled, folding his newspaper. “Because everyone deserves someone on their side, Ada. I wish someone had defended me when I was your age.” His voice sounded sad, almost broken. Ada felt sorry for him. She didn’t know why. She only nodded, whispering, “Thank you.”
That night, the city outside rumbled with thunder. Ada couldn’t sleep. She watched the lightning flash through her window, the rain beating softly on the roof. Somewhere deep inside, she began to wish her mother would visit soon.
Chapter 5: The Rain
The rains came early that year. Every evening, clouds gathered over Lagos like dark blankets, and thunder rolled across the rooftops. Inside the house, the light often flickered. The air smelled of wet earth and kerosene.
Auntie Rose had traveled again for her church women’s retreat. She said she would be gone for a week. Before leaving, she hugged Ada and said, “Be good. Listen to uncle. Don’t waste food.” Ada nodded, trying to smile. But as the car drove away, a small chill ran through her.
For the first day or two, everything was normal. Uncle Ben cooked noodles for dinner and made jokes about how terrible his cooking was. They watched television together, the sound of rain knocking softly on the windows. He asked about school, about her friends, about her dreams. “I still want to be a nurse,” Ada said, eyes bright again. He nodded. “Good. Lagos needs more hearts like yours.” His words made her blush.
But slowly, the house began to feel different. Quieter. He spoke less. She started to feel his eyes on her longer than before. And she didn’t know what to do with the silence that followed. Sometimes he stood too close when they talked. Other times he was distant, lost in thought. Ada told herself she was imagining things. He was her uncle. The same man who always defended her. The same man who called her “my scholar.”
One evening, as lightning flashed outside, the power went out. Ada sat by the candle, writing her homework. Her shadow danced on the wall. Uncle Ben walked in quietly and sat opposite her. The candlelight flickered between them. “You remind me of my younger sister,” he said suddenly. “She was bright like you.” Ada smiled politely. “Where is she now?” He looked away. “Gone a long time ago.” His voice carried sadness, and Ada didn’t know how to comfort him.
After that night, she began to pray more often. She didn’t know why exactly. Maybe because the house felt too heavy when it rained. Maybe because she missed her mother’s laughter.
Chapter 6: The Fading Light
At school, Ada tried to act normal, but her teachers noticed she had become quiet. Her best friend, Tolu, whispered one day, “Ada, are you okay?” “I’m fine,” Ada said quickly. “Just tired.” Tolu smiled sadly. “You don’t look fine.”
When Auntie Rose returned, Ada felt relief flood through her like sunlight after days of storm. She ran to greet her and held her tightly. Auntie Rose laughed. “And you missed me this much?” “Yes, Ma,” Ada said, eyes watery. “The house was too quiet.” Uncle Ben only smiled. “She behaved well while you were gone.”
But from that week onward, Ada was never quite the same. She stopped singing while washing dishes. She started locking her room at night, even though Auntie Rose teased, “What are you hiding in there?” Nothing was said aloud. But something had changed. Something deep and unseen.
Ada’s body began to fail her little by little. She lost her appetite. She woke up tired, often sick. At school, she struggled to focus. Numbers blurred on the board. Words slipped from her memory. One afternoon, she came home early because she felt dizzy. Auntie Rose scolded her, “How can you come home before closing time? You think money grows on trees?” Ada stood quietly, eyes down. Uncle Ben stepped in again, his voice calm. “Rose, she’s sick. Let her rest.” “You always defend her. She’s just a child.” Auntie Rose sighed and walked away.
Ada sat on the sofa, heart pounding. He turned to her, “Don’t worry about her. You’re safe here.” She nodded but looked away. That night, when everyone slept, Ada cried softly into her pillow. She didn’t understand why the words, “You’re safe here,” made her heart hurt.
Chapter 7: The Breaking
The days grew shorter. The sun still rose over Lagos, but for Ada, it no longer felt warm. Each morning, she forced herself to smile at school. Her teachers noticed how pale she’d become, how her once lively voice now trembled when she read. Her handwriting had changed too—the lines shaky and uneven.
“Are you sick?” her teacher asked once. Ada nodded faintly. “Just tired, Ma.” When she got home, Auntie Rose would say, “You look thin, Ada. Are you eating at all?” “Yes, Ma,” she’d whisper, even though food no longer tasted like anything. Uncle Ben still smiled kindly when he saw her, but she had stopped meeting his eyes. Something inside her wanted to hide from him, from the world, from the ache that lived in her chest.
At night, she often sat by the window, staring at the sky. The stars looked blurry, like they were crying with her. Sometimes she whispered her mother’s name. She wanted to go home, but she was afraid to ask. A few times she tried to write letters—half-finished pages that began with, “Mommy, how are you?” and ended with tear stains. She would fold them neatly and hide them under her pillow, too scared to send them.
When Sunday came, Auntie Rose dressed her for church. The dress hung loose on her shoulders. “You’re not growing, Ada. What’s wrong?” “Nothing, Ma.” “Nothing again,” her aunt sighed. “You better eat before school resumes next term.” After church, Uncle Ben gave her a pack of chinchin and smiled. “Sweet girl,” he said softly. Ada nodded, forcing a thank you. But that night, she couldn’t eat. The food turned to sand in her mouth. She curled up in bed, whispering prayers to a God she hoped still listened. “If you can hear me,” she said quietly, “please make me strong again.”
Chapter 8: The Unraveling
Weeks passed. Her grades dropped. Her laughter disappeared. The neighbors started to talk. “That girl looks sick,” they whispered. Auntie Rose grew more worried. She took Ada to a clinic nearby. The nurse looked her over and asked questions Ada couldn’t answer. When they left, Auntie Rose looked at her husband, eyes wide. “She needs more tests,” she said. “We’ll go to a bigger hospital.” He nodded slowly. “Yes, we’ll go.” But they didn’t.
Ada began to lose weight faster. Her eyes sank. Her voice grew faint. Every step hurt. She missed school for days at a time. One evening, as she lay on her bed, Tolu came to visit. The moment she saw her friend, she burst into tears.
“Ada, you look so weak,” Tolu cried, holding her hand. “What happened?” Ada shook her head. “I don’t know. I just want to sleep and not wake up tired.” Tolu’s mother later told Auntie Rose, “Please take that child to the hospital again. This is not normal.” Auntie Rose nodded, worry all over her face. “I will tomorrow.” But tomorrow came and went. The pain grew worse. Sometimes Ada couldn’t stand. She whispered to herself, “It’s okay. It will stop soon.”
Chapter 9: The Truth
One night, the generator went off suddenly. The house went quiet. Auntie Rose found her sitting by the window again, staring at the moon. “Come to bed,” she said gently. “You need rest.” Ada looked up and whispered, “Auntie, will I get well?” Auntie Rose froze. “Of course, my dear. You will.” But her voice broke as she said it. When she left the room, Ada lay back and closed her eyes. She thought of her village, the smell of firewood, her mother’s laughter, the red ribbon in her hair. A tear rolled down her cheek. Outside, the wind blew softly through the mango tree. It carried a quiet song, the kind that only angels could sing.
Morning came slowly that day. The house was too quiet. Even the birds outside seemed unsure if they should sing. Ada had grown thinner, her skin pale, her eyes lost in a faraway place. Auntie Rose sat beside her, pressing a damp cloth to her forehead. “Hold on, my child,” she whispered. “You’ll be fine.” But deep down, she felt fear curling inside her chest.
At school, Ada’s absence had become a mystery. Her teacher finally visited the house. When she saw Ada lying weakly on the bed, her heart broke. “This child needs proper care,” she said firmly. “Something is wrong, and it’s not just sickness.” The words lingered in the air. Uncle Ben stood by the door, arms folded, expression calm but unreadable.
A few days later, Auntie Rose decided to take Ada to the city hospital herself. The doctor asked questions, did tests, then stepped aside to speak quietly with Auntie Rose. When she returned, her face was white as chalk. She could not speak for a long time.
That evening, as rain began to fall again, Auntie Rose sat on the floor beside Ada’s bed. Tears streamed down her face as she brushed Ada’s hair gently. “My baby,” she whispered. “I should have protected you.” Ada blinked slowly, confusion in her weak eyes. “It’s okay, Auntie. Don’t cry.” But Auntie Rose couldn’t stop. She held Ada’s hand, shaking, whispering over and over, “I’m sorry. I’m so sorry.”
Uncle Ben was taken away quietly. No shouting, no struggle, just silence—the heavy kind that comes when a house remembers every unspoken word.
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